The more i look at this. I dont know what to think. moh ;o !
I think the thing thats wrong is.. the media. But i wont bother to cg it. not now, anyway.
Started by drawing my own left hand randomly, thats the one you see roughly in the middle. The male hand in her face. yeh.
Then I left it for a while, went on with other things. Came back, drew bub. and. it was HER hand to begin with, but then i realised omg

The thumb is at the wrong side. all wrong, hoh. I didnt think i could do quer mistaeks like that anymore.
SO i had to save it. It HAD to belong to another person, so i put mr bowie behind her.
gah xD
Couldnt think of another person it would work with, because he's touching her super sexually, hooyeah.
also, I am fully aware that he dissapears at the bottom. behind her. And his eye is weird, in the bad way.
I.. eh. have no excuse for that. la de da. majick !
bub © me
ziggy © db
<3
Nice job on this, I love the style and all the details and shading. Ziggy is the sex.